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PostSubject: The power of shadows   Thu Sep 30, 2010 3:17 am

Naru Running in a nightmare "WHATS GOING ON" the voice of darkness speaks "hahahahaha you cannot run forever soon you will be mine"

"NEVER I WILL NEVER JOIN THE LIKES OF YOU" naru wakes up gasping

".....n I had that dream again" a man speaks "NARU YOU LITTLE BRAT GET OUT OF YOUR ROOM BE FOR I TARE YOU TO SHREDS" "IM COMEING YOU OLD BAT" naru gets out of bed and grabs her things and she hires the voice again "YOU WILL COME TO ME MY CHILD" naru’s eyes turn red " i belong to no one but myself" she go’s down stares and a gargoyle who can turn into a human or can look like one turns and stares at her "GET OUT OF THIS HOUSE YOUR NOT NEEDED HERE" she sneers "what ever you can’t tell me what i already know and I’m 10 times stronger than you besides you will not be here if i have not saved your tail" he softens "go and show the fools what the power of darkness can do"


to be continued...


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PostSubject: Re: The power of shadows   Thu Sep 30, 2010 6:11 am

if the spelling was any good i would've voted yes
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PostSubject: Re: The power of shadows   Fri Oct 01, 2010 2:47 am

darkus_shadow wrote:
if the spelling was any good i would've voted yes
i fixed it ok
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PostSubject: Re: The power of shadows   Fri Oct 01, 2010 11:29 pm

Grammar and spelling need LOTS of work.... -_- Wow..... That was painful to read.
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PostSubject: Re: The power of shadows   Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:02 am

DarkusPhoenix wrote:
Grammar and spelling need LOTS of work.... -_- Wow..... That was painful to read.


I agreed
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PostSubject: Re: The power of shadows   Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:06 am

DarkusPhoenix wrote:
Grammar and spelling need LOTS of work.... -_- Wow..... That was painful to read.

Well, that is obvious. You're not used to Naru talk.
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PostSubject: Re: The power of shadows   Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:50 am

COME ON IT IS MY FIRST FAN FIC GIVE ME A BRAKE Mad Sad Crying or Very sad Embarassed No pale Shocked Rolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: The power of shadows   Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:23 pm

Naru wrote:
COME ON IT IS MY FIRST FAN FIC GIVE ME A BRAKE Mad Sad Crying or Very sad Embarassed No pale Shocked Rolling Eyes

Wow... Angry, Crying, Sad, Embarrassed, Negative, Pale, Shocked AND Rolling Eyes all at once? Priceless Face!!
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